Thursday, 10 September 2015

Fiction writing - The Hero's Journey

The Hero's Journey


What is The Hero’s Journey


The Hero’s Journey is 12 steps of any journey a novel takes.  It doesn't mater
if it is romance, horror or sci-fi If you need to outline your story, I would suggest you work according to this.  It will help you focus and complete your story quickly.

In the diagram below, it shows the 12 steps.




How can The Hero’s Journey help me?

Where would you like me to begin?  The hero’s journey is a fantastic tool to help you write your story.  It is perfect for outlining your story.  Just follow the steps, adapting them to your story and voila!  Your novel will basically write itself.  Why?  Because it gives structure and is goal orientated.

The 12 stages of the Hero’s Journey

Step 1 - The ordinary world

In step 1, we introduce the hero.  They can be human, animal, alien, or whatever your mind can conjure.  When introducing your hero, please keep in mind that the reader needs to get a picture of who they are.  What they like.  Where they live.  Their weaknesses.  The audience has to identify with the character.  Feel sympathy for them.
E.g.  Kristen is a teacher at a posh secondary school for girls in France.

Step 2 – The call to action

In step 2, something happens to the hero.  A negative change takes place.  A new adventure begins.
E.g.  Kristen loses her job.

Step 3 – Refusal

In step 3, the hero is reluctant to engage physically, mentally or emotionally.  Most people do not deal well with change.  The unknown makes us feel vulnerable.
E.g.  Kirsten refuses to go back home to the small village of Dexter (fictional place) in England.

Step 4 –The mentor

In step 4, the mentor is a person who assists the hero in starting their journey.  This happens via training, equipment, or advice.
E.g.  Kirsten is out of money.  Her best friend Rene suggests she goes home just until she can find a job again.

Step 5 – Crossing the threshold

In step 5, the hero accepts the challenge.  Leaving the ordinary world behind.  Entering unfamiliar territories, rules, or values.
E.g.  Kirsten returns home.  Immediately she is pushed into working in the family bakery.

Step 6 –The Test

In step 6, the hero sort their friends from their enemies.  Life is not an island.
E.g.  Kirsten can’t bake.  The bakery is in financial trouble.  Sexy Kelvin is her father’s bakers apprentice and sees her as a threat. 

Step 7 – The Approach

In step 7 – the hero and their friends prepare for the challenge, whether it is in a new world, city, job, etc.
E.g.  Kirsten finds out about the bakeries financial problems.  Enlists Kelvin’s help in saving the family's bakery

Step 8 – The Ordeal

In step 8, the hero faces either his greatest fear or faces death.  This is usually the cliff hanger.
E.g.  Someone sets the bakery on fire.  Her father gets a heart attack.

Step 9 – The Reward

In step 9, the hero gets rewarded for conquering his enemies (alive or dead).  But it is not over yet.
E.g.  Kirsten refuses to let it get her down.  She starts baking from home to pay off the debt.

Step 10 –The Road Back

In step 10 – the hero is so close to achieving success, but then something happens to prevent them from succeeding. 
E.g.  Just as she thinks her life is getting on track, again her father has a massive stroke and dies.  The bank calls in the loan.  Their farm is the collateral. 

Step 11 – Atonement

In step 11 –the hero or their friends will have to make sacrifices for the greater good.  This is the climax chapter or scene.  Balance is restored.
E.g.  Kirsten has three days to come up with £50 000.  Kelvin makes her an offer as a partner in the bakery in exchange for settling the bakeries debt.

Step 12 – The Return

In step 12 – the hero returns to the ordinary world transformed.  The transformation will either be physically, mentally, emotionally or a combination of all three.
E.g.  Kirsten accepts Kelvins partnership.  She also starts baking classes from the farm.

As you can see.  By just following the basic steps of The Hero’s Journey, you can adapt it to any story you would like.

Until we meet again,

Just Write

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